Friday, October 2, 2015

Commercial English on the Shampoo bottle

 
 
I  know myself that I am not good at English nor use of English.
 
I just feel not right when I read this bottle of Lotion today.
 
May be this is "new English"? 
 
Am I wrong or tell me or if you can, make a better version.
 
HK Snob